One Shot Wednesday :My "Shadorma"

This is my first time participating in One shot Wednesday hosted by Claudia. I am as shy with my poetry as I am with my art...but I thought,why not?I'm giving it a shot! This is a "Shadorma".A shadorma poem is just a six-line stanza that is ruled by syllables.
line 1: 3 syllables
line 2: 5 syllables
line 3: 3 syllables
line 4: 3 syllables
line 5: 7 syllables
line 6: 5 syllables
Here we goooo!
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 "Please hear me

There’s so much to say

Shut me out

Turn away

Your eyes close my voice rises

now only silence"


This speaks a lot about my feelings tonight...
Thank you for stopping by!
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Comments

  1. One Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and ArtistsDecember 15, 2010 at 2:16 AM

    i understand art and writing are personal
    thanks for opening the petals of your beatiful words for us tonight

    Glad you shared with One Shot you have a gift

    Moondustwriter

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  2. Brian MillerDecember 15, 2010 at 10:27 AM

    first thanks for joining up at one shot...there is an interesting duality to your words...its tight, done well...keep sharing...

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  3. BubbaDecember 15, 2010 at 2:40 PM

    I hear you.

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  4. dustusDecember 15, 2010 at 3:29 PM

    Thanks for introducing me to this form. You create from the structure very well. Nice One Shot!

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  5. My Vegan LifeDecember 16, 2010 at 9:05 AM

    Thank you all for visiting and the kind words!Can't wait to do it again!

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  6. Steve IsaakDecember 17, 2010 at 4:31 PM

    Effectively isolated feel to this. Good work.

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